Tuesday, November 13, 2012

Hello, This week we divide the class in four groups of six people, and we have write a story. One people Start a story and the other continues writting the story with another paragraf. At the end all the people have a one story and written one paragraf in the others story.


Murder in New York

It was 2005, she lived in the city of New York, It was a rainy day and a woman called Christine was at home watching the TV, when a very strong man knocked the door. Christine didn’t know nothing but the strong man was a murderer, Christine opened the door of her so the strong man entry to his house and he attacked to Christine.

The murderer went directly to Christine and the murderer take a gun and killed Christine and he went to her house. Two day’s later,the sister of Christine, Mary, called to her house. Mary suspected something strange and she went to the house of Christine. When she arrived to the house of her sister opened the door, the house was dark and some things were in the floor. Mary took the telephone and she phoned to the Police.

The police come immediately and they started to investigate the murder. Mary was very sad, she was surprised, ¿why her sister?, she wasn’t have owes with anybody and she didn’t enter in problems. She was a citizen normal. Mary went to her sister’s bedroom and he saw a letter behind the desk. She read the letter. She was wrote by computer and it contain a threat, a threat to kill Christine. It didn’t put why but the person who wrote the note killed Christine.

When Mary read the letter with the threat, she thought that the murderer was the man who wrote that, so she started investigating on her own because she want to revenge the murder of his sister Christine. That night she went to the neighbours of her and she asked if someone saw a tall man in the house in the morning. The neighbour of the 3rd floor said that the tall man asked him where Cristine lived but it was more or less at 11:30pm.

She gave the thanks to the neighbour and he decided to continue the investigation with the clues that he had. Mary thought that the murderer could act again at night so she waited until the nightfall and he went to the surroundings of the building where lived her sister. She stayed walking around the building two hours or more. Suddenly, when she decided going home, she saw a tall man with the characteristics that describe the neighbour that spoke with her.

Mary attacked to the men, the men had a gun on her hand and tried to kill mary but mary avoided all the shots and took for her handbag a knife. Mary, attacked with her knife to the men and stick in her leg. Later, Mary phoned to the police and the police came to the house. Mary had temptation to killed the murder of her sister but, he thought that was better revenge that the murder went to the prison. The police, arrest to murder and they condemned 15 years for killing the sister of Mary.
                                       THE END
                                                                                               Writted by group B:
                                                             1-Iker azpiazu 2-manex izagirre
                                                             3-joannes garikano 4- Joseba olaetxea                                                              5-Ibon iparragirre 6- Imanol Arruebarrena
                                                                                                     
Here you have the links for see how we have do  all the storys.
My story 
Iker Azpiazu
Joannes Garikano
Ibon Iparragirre
Manex Izagirre
Joseba Olaetxea

1 comment:

  1. Please, most of your verbs, subjects, possessives...are wrong!!!!!!

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